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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Good story with nice portrayals of the Cartwrights.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting! 

Date: 09/08/2018 - 11:56 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

 I do enjoy a tale that slowly and cleverly pulls you in only to 'poke you in the eye'! That twist and change of direction was so that I had to back-track to the beginning. 

As like the other reviewers, Hop Sings was a gem and as like Ant, that 'Cartwright' line was so right.

I don't know if you meant to but, it brings to my mind the episode where ... oops, best leave it there, don't want to give anything away - I think though you know what I am referring to.

Author's Response:

Thank you, ansi. Sorry for the 'poke in the eye'. Couldn't help myself. 

Date: 08/04/2018 - 03:00 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bahj Signed
What a great summer story! It’s hard to review this without giving anything away, but as I read, even knowing there was a twist coming, I was still surprised. You’re descriptions of the desert heat were spot on, I’m glad I’m missing it this year! I loved Hop Sings little spotlight, lol. Thanks so much for writing and sharing :0)
Date: 08/03/2018 - 11:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

What an unexpected twist! Well done, Tracey. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, bahj, for reading and commenting. 

Date: 08/03/2018 - 08:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamant Signed

This is a story that grabs you and then provides an interesting twist that makes you rethink everything to deermine that was read before. Hop Sing is also delightfully rendered -- he makes one smile.

My favorite line : Leaning on the side of caution was the right thing to do; the Cartwright thing to do.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Adamant, for reading and leaving comments. I appreciate your time and thoughts.

Date: 08/02/2018 - 11:07 am [Report This]
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