Wow! This is an interesting story about Adam's first love. Rufus is horrible, and I hate to think what Rosalie's life is like with him. I hope she gets away from him before he beats her to death. Well done!
Well, thank you! I thought thia was an interesting story but only you and Tracy seem to agree. I really appreciate your review (and I don't think Rufus would beat Rosalie to death; he only did what he did because he caught her and Adam in a compromising position.)