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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bahj Signed
Cute story with a very refreshing ending. Thanks for sharing :0)
Date: 08/04/2018 - 09:38 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: daisy60 Signed

This was a fun story to read. The heat can make people do or say things without thinking. The ending was extra special with Hop Sing helping everyone cool down!

Author's Response:

Thank you daisy60 and as alike my other responses I'm sorry for the delay.

Pleased you had fun reading - where would the Cartwright's be without Hop Sing - I have to include him in any family story.

Date: 07/25/2018 - 02:11 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: littlejoenice Signed

In the heat, a man's bound to get irritated by anything and everything. This is a great way to demonstrate those feelings. I'm just glad that they all got a bit cooled off in the end. Something tells me they needed that.

Author's Response:

Thank you, littlejoenice, first I must apologise for the late response.

I agree heat can make the mildest of men into a grump - nothing like an unexpected cooldown. 

Date: 07/17/2018 - 11:03 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamant Signed

I enjoy prequels on occasion and this one portrays a most endearing little Little Joe. A leisurely, late afternoon turns from merely hot and uncomfortable into an inferno and then, a blessing from heaven. Humorous at points, serious in others, it's written in ansi's inimitable style.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the 'long time no response' - July just flew by.

That young Joe came across as endearing is a bonus - I try to make him a pest but a lovable one.

Even in the dire circumstances I always find humour to be lurking - somewhere.

Heck!! Ant, your last three words leave me honoured!


Date: 07/08/2018 - 08:54 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

This story explores the challenge prompt literally and figuratively. Ansinico's "younger Cartwrights" always entertain, and each younger version clearly reflects the adult men we know from the series.

A bit of mystery and action add nicely to the story, and the ending is a feel good for all.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy, sorry for the delay in responding July for me was a tad hectic. 

I'm pleased that you found the young Cartwrights characters mini versions of those lovely men and also entertaining.   

Date: 07/07/2018 - 10:09 pm [Report This]
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