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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Marla Fair Signed

Sweet and funny.  Enjoyed it!  

Author's Response:

Thanks, Marla - glad you enjoyed .

Date: 06/17/2018 - 10:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

Little Joe is so cute! Poor Hop Sing had his hands full.

Author's Response:

He sure did PT, thanks for leaving a comment.

Date: 06/12/2018 - 04:18 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Nice story.  I picture Little Joe being a little live wire.

Author's Response:

 Sierras - I have the same picture of Little Joe - thank you for reading and reviewing. 

Date: 06/12/2018 - 04:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Nice opening chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Sierras for reviewing both chapters.

Date: 06/12/2018 - 03:36 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Little Joe and Hop Sing must have had a close relationship, and this story shows it for sure. Young Joe is the perfect mini-version of the Joe seen in the series - attention is paid to his adult qualities, which are shrunken down to younger-Joe size.

Nice use of your prompt, ansinico!

Author's Response:


Tracy your review makes the writing worthwhile - thank you.

Date: 06/11/2018 - 10:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

This is such an adorable story, ansi! I love little Little Joe's relationship with Hop Sing, and I love how Roy stands up for Hop Sing in the store! The details in the story are so vividly written I feel as though I'm watching an episode when I read it.

Author's Response:

CG@H, your comments are welcome.  I too enjoy little LJ's and Hop Sings relationship and of course like to weave stories around it. I also think Roy Coffee had an impact on the young Cartwrights.  That the story came across as an episode - thank you.


Date: 06/11/2018 - 09:40 pm [Report This]
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