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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

A very interesting story.  You keep a nice pace and a thread of mystery that keeps the reader wanting to know more.  I like the new characters you created with many layers and depth to their personalities.  Very well done!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the encouragment.  Another chapter is brewing.

Date: 07/05/2018 - 07:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sport Signed

Can’t wait to hear about Keep!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  The next installment.  Much trouble is brewing for the Cartwrights and Fayettes.

Date: 06/15/2018 - 09:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

A story with this many characters warrents a sequel! This story is original and filled with challenge-worthy descriptions from beginning to end.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tracy.  Yes, there will definitely be a sequel.  These characters simply have taken over the story.  We'll see where they go.  I'm anticipating a summer challenge.

Date: 06/01/2018 - 09:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Nice story.  I take it there's going to be a sequel?

 



Author's Response:

Yes.  It will include Adam, Hoss, the Fayettes and Li Min.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.

Date: 05/29/2018 - 12:16 pm [Report This]
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