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Title: Epilogue Reviewer: Sharry Signed

Ah!!!!  Now I understand everything much better.  

The three brothers certainly had a rough time after Marie passed away.  Everyone did although it seems things got a lot worse before they got better for all of them.  Poor Adam - no wonder he's so hopelessly responsible!  If Hoss and Joe had not had Adam for an older brother they might all have been lost for sure.  It was good when Ben had finished the worst of his grief process and could go home and stay.  All three boys needed him badly.  

Great, fun story.  Thank you so much for filling in those much needed details.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews, Sharry.  Glad you enjoyed the tale.  I just felt there had to be something pretty dang traumatc and deeply buried that would bring Joe to ever think his older brother would hold a gun on him and shoot him.  This was my 'take' on why.  

Date: 05/18/2018 - 10:31 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Sharry Signed

Oh, this is a wonderful beginning.  Yes, I've always wondered what was going on in Joe's head during the bushwhacking episode.  The metaphores were too deep for me at the time.  I still find them confusing.  It will be wonderful to at last have some insight into this confounding, bewildering situation.  I'll keep reading...  

Date: 05/18/2018 - 09:48 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Smorgana Signed

This is also one of my favourite episodes and this is such an interesting take on that fever dream.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it. 

Date: 05/18/2018 - 05:03 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed

"...thin as a bed slat and rangy as a prairie chicken..."

That has to be one of the best lines of description I've ever read! xD



Author's Response:

That's what you get when you have a writer who is also an artist!  LOL  Thank you for your multiple reviews on the story and your compliments!  All are appreciated. 

Date: 05/17/2018 - 12:59 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed

I can imagine that happening--Ben running off to grieve. He didn't have a chance to when Elizabeth and Inger both died, but with Marie, since Adam was old enough, he would have had the chance. Very believable. Poor Adam though, left with his grieving brothers and a laundry list of chores!

Date: 05/17/2018 - 12:36 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed

Interesting intro. It took me a while to place the episode, but so far I really like what you've done. Buskwhacked! is one of my favourite episodes--despite the wonky screenplay. Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Date: 05/17/2018 - 12:22 am [Report This]
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