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Title: You Don't Love Me Anymore Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

I enjoyed this story very much.  Nice writing.  Love your dialog.  I could picture this as an episode.  Nice character development.

Good job!!

Date: 07/25/2018 - 09:10 am [Report This]
Title: You Don't Love Me Anymore Reviewer: Sierras Signed

An exciting story.  Nice characterazations, and good pacing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sierras! :)

Date: 05/05/2018 - 12:23 am [Report This]
Title: You Don't Love Me Anymore Reviewer: Tracy Signed

This is certainly an action packed story, with Adam's protective nature at the forefront. 

The title prompt lends itself to avariety of storylines, and the one chosen reads like a Bonanza episode. 

Thanks for an entertaining read, CowgirlAtHeart.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and the kind review, Tracy! :)

Date: 03/15/2018 - 07:58 pm [Report This]
Title: You Don't Love Me Anymore Reviewer: PlatoofthePonderosa Signed

Oh, this is sweet. I can easily imagine it as an episode. It's just the sort of jam Adam (or any Cartwright, for that matter) gets into: helping a stranger, the stagecoach holdup, another bullet in the arm, some girl pinning her hopes on him over a misunderstanding. And Audie was sweet and spunky, not annoying like so many of the girls the Cartwrights meet. :)

I always love seeing Adam with his guitar. 

Thanks, Cowgirl!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Plato!  I was attempting to write the story like a Bonanza episode (especially regarding pacing, character development, and such), and I'm glad to hear you can imagine it as one! :)

Date: 03/15/2018 - 03:24 pm [Report This]
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