I just went back for a 2ond read and it's even better the 2ond time! It would be great to have an updated story about what happened to Jesse. They never would have found Joe and Joe never could have left without Jesse's help. I dread thinking what could have happened at the hands of Jesse's brothers. Terrific story!
Thank you, Daisy. I'm thrilled that you wanted to give the story a second read.
And yes, poor Jesse. He certainly had a hard life with the brothers he was given. In the end, he knew right from wrong, and what he wanted to do to change things.
Your idea for an updated story is intriguing - maybe I could do that someday. I guess we'll see if the spirit ever moves me in that direction. :)