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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: daisy60 Signed

I just went back for a 2ond read and it's even better the 2ond time! It would be great to have an updated story about what happened to Jesse. They never would have found Joe and Joe never could have left without Jesse's help. I dread thinking what could have happened at the hands of Jesse's brothers. Terrific story!

Author's Response:

Thank you, Daisy.  I'm thrilled that you wanted to give the story a second read.  

And yes, poor Jesse.  He certainly had a hard life with the brothers he was given.  In the end, he knew right from wrong, and what he wanted to do to change things.   

Your idea for an updated story is intriguing - maybe I could do that someday.  I guess we'll see if the spirit ever moves me in that direction.  :)

Date: 01/11/2020 - 07:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Rosanna Signed

That was an intense story. It had me captivated until the end.

Author's Response:

Things can get intense for the Cartwrights quickly, can't they?  If Joe is in trouble, his brothers will move Heaven and earth to find him.    

I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed the story, Rosanna.  Thank you for the feedback.  :)    

Date: 12/28/2019 - 05:57 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Marla Fair Signed

Great story, Sharry.  I love your interplay between the brothers and you have Adam nailed!  Thanks! 

Author's Response:

Thank you, Marla.  I am flattered you approve of my 'take' on Adam.  He's a mysterious man in some ways yet not so much in others.  The Cartwright brothers do offer an endless supply of fascinating interaction for all of us to expand upon and have fun with.  :)       

Date: 04/12/2018 - 04:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Good story that focuses on the three brothers, and their bonds to each other.

Author's Response:

Thank you Sierras!  The special bond that exists between the Cartwright brothers is always a favorite topic of mine. 


I'm happy to hear that came through to you.  Thank you for letting me know.  :)    

Date: 04/08/2018 - 05:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

I enjoyed your story. I was a little concerned about Jesse, and I was glad that Hoss was planning on having him travel with them to. Virginia City. He needs someone to watch out for him, and he's the kind of stray Hoss picks up.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Pt.  I worried about Jesse also.  I considered extending the story by having Jesse go home with the Cartwrights for awhile for a brand new start.  We both know Hoss would have taken care of him.  I ended things where I did for brevity as well as the fact that Hoss already had his hands full with his own brothers.  Just attaching himself to the Cartwrights was going to be the perfect initial change for Jesse. 

I appreciate your kind review.  :)              

Date: 03/26/2018 - 05:06 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: daisy60 Signed

Wow! This is quite a story. I'm so glad Adam and Hoss found Jesse and were led to Joe. Not surprising that both Adam and Hoss would stop at nothing to rescue Joe. This is the way brothers should be towards each other, something Jesse never had the chance to know.

Author's Response:

Thank you Daisy.  I'm happy to hear you drew the intended conclusion from the story.  It's my belief Adam and Hoss would never stop looking for Joe - none of them would if one of them was missing.   I think all of the Cartwright men understood they were fortunate to have each other before this incident.  Something like this just helped them remember it more readily.  :)  

Date: 03/21/2018 - 03:16 pm [Report This]
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