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Title: After Forever (Parts 1 to 13, inclusive) Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

What a great story! Meg and Winona are wonderful characters.

Date: 07/02/2018 - 03:58 pm [Report This]
Title: After Forever (Parts 1 to 13, inclusive) Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

This was a very interesting story.

Great writing skills. Very descriptive and it flows so smoothly for the reader.

First of all, I fell in love with Winona.  What an amazing woman you created.  I could picture her in every scene she was in.  Loved your phrase..."struck by lightning"  that's what I've always pictured and wanted for Adam.  Can't imagine him settling for mediocre. You nailed it! Winona with a bow?  Wow!  Pitch perfect for Adam. 

Absolutely love your hidden tributes to Dan and Mike.  Wouldn't Pernell love that too?  And the babies names....pure sweetness!  Adam's tribute to his mother and father. That is so Adam!

Your description of Will Cartwright is spot on.  Blunt but true.

It was interesting to see what happened to Peggy.  I would have kept her original name though.  The name change created a bit of distance between her and Adam for me.

Winona was the real "star" of this story in my opinion.  She made me smile for Adam.  Which means you made me smile for Adam....



Author's Response:

thank you. You're very perceptive and kind, and I appreciate it.

 

Date: 05/28/2018 - 10:52 am [Report This]
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