Wow! That's an intense story and sweet with a touching ending. It very nicely shows Ben's love for his son. I also like the idea of Elizabeth watching over her son.
Ben and Adam must have had many adventures and close calls as they journeyed from Boston to Nevada. This story touches on the bond between Ben and his first born son, and the addition of detail having to do with the past gives the reader just enough information.
Such a tender sweet story. The connection between the characters was very well done. Their love for each other pops off the page. Nice writing!
Enjoyed this very much!
Wow, what a great story! The suspense was very well done...I was on the edge of my seat...and the resolution was very satisfying. I love thinking of Elizabeth continuing to watch over Ben and Adam!
Thank you for reading it and commenting on it I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, this was an intense little thriller! What a traumatic experience for both Ben and Adam. It makes me want to scoop up that sweet little boy and keep him safe forever. :'(
I like stories that mention Elizabeth. I feel she gets less attention than Ben's other wives, but she has a very special place in my heart. Thank you!
Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment. I'm glad you liked it.
Awww.. such a sweet ending to a nail biting story. Elizabeth was looking after her son and she was there with Ben. Thanks for sharing such a sweet story with us pt
You are so kind. Thank you.