Wow - I've tried writing two previous reviews on this story. Neither has taken... We'll see what happens this time. If this one doesn't stick something weird is underfoot.
I was spellbound by the suspense that was all around here. I loved it! It occurs to me the attack Adam witnessed on Joe would have been potentially double traumatizing for him due to the memories of the attack on his father years earlier. No wonder Adam was so glum. He burdens were many.
I loved the emotional intensity that was so evident in this story. Ben is extremely close to each one of his sons, and that was evident here. Adam carried his grief for Joe's injury in every fiber of his body. He wasn't ok even when it was apparent Joe would be. The poor man - I hope the whole family was exceptionally good to him after such a traumatic experience.
I loved your story! Thank you for writing such a suspenseful and spooky Halloween tale. :) Author's Response:
Thanks Sharry, I appreciate your efforts in trying to write and leave a review.