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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Sharry Signed


Well, that was an unusual night by the campfire for sure.  Ansi - you have such a vivid imagination.  The playful use of baldness as each man's ultimate horror is so funny.  I think it could well be Joe's undoing for sure.  All of that beautiful, curly hair gone forever?  It can't happen.  :) 

It's always fun to see Adam almost completely unnerved.  It doesn't happen as often as with the other two brothers.  I enjoy your fanciful, descriptive tales of surprise and ghoulishness.  Thank you for another fun Halloween season read.   

Author's Response:

Sharry, thank you, I much appreciate your comments.  My imagination has always been on the upper end of the scale of incredulity.  Regardless of the word prompts I had to bring loss of hair into the story somewhere and yes, having Adam was a bonus, I do like to turn the MIB around a little.

Date: 10/28/2017 - 12:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bejules Signed

Great story ansi - love the banter between the brothers and them tricking Joe!  After that it turned into a Ponderosa Nightmare that's for sure and gave me a good dose of goosebumps to boot!

Author's Response:

It is always my intention to start a scary story keeping it near as damn it to normal - it's a Hitchcockian thing - not that I am in any way comparing my efforts to that great man of mystery and horror but I'll take him as my mentor any day!

I must add that those three word prompts took some thinking on - which can only mean the grey matter has not yet dissolved into a dirty puddle!

Thanks, Jules, your review is appreciated. 

Date: 10/28/2017 - 11:35 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

It was so funny the way it began, and then it turned into a nightmare. I need to go back and read the other stories. Thank you for goose bumps!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - it's always good to get come-back.  Way back in August there was no intention in my mind to be writing the start of a 'tri-quel', it was just the way Patina's prompts fell but, it did help with the final Halloween story.

Date: 10/27/2017 - 09:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

Incredible story!  I really like how it starts with humor (the boys' banter is hilarious) and then turns into terror!  A terrific follow-up to the two previous stories!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Cowgirl@Heart, for the review.  Glad you enjoyed the humour as well as the fright.  I find running the two together - fun & fright - is much more disturbing.

Date: 10/26/2017 - 11:20 pm [Report This]
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