I enjoyed this story very much.
I love the interaction between the Cartwrights. So real. So true.
You write suspense and intrigue very well. The clues were scattered just right until the very end.
The legend told and the heroism is Bonanza at its best.
I like the emotion too.
This is a story you can't put down.
Very well done.
Thanks so much, Tahoe Lee!
I'm a big fan of suspenseful stories myself. Thus, I'm happy to hear you found this particular story aligning with that category. :)
Emotions do run deep in the Cartwright family - so much so that it's my opinion many fan fic stories can almost write themselves simply because we all know the characters so well. We know intrinsically what each man would do in a multitude of situations. Adam would do anything to protect Joe.
Thank you for reading. Your feedback is appreciated. :)