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Title: Epilogue Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is a very good story with poignant/sweet family moments and there's a mystery. It's a "page-turner" of a story with nice portrayals of the Cartwrights. (I'm sorry I think I accidently reviewed the first chapter twice)



Author's Response:

Sierras, that you so much for reading my story. Long stories don't get much attention, but you hung in there for the entire thing, and I do appreciate it.

Many of my stories are long, and I hope you'll con sider taking a chance on another one sometime.

We seem to share the same vision of the Cartwright family, even though some details in my writing so beyond the television show canon and more into the "real" world back then.

 

Thank you, again!

Date: 10/28/2018 - 09:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is a very good story with poignant/sweet family moments and a mystery.  It's a "page-turner" of a story, and nice portrayals of the Cartwrights.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 06:04 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 29 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Sweet family moments.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 05:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 28 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Poignant moments

Date: 10/27/2018 - 05:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 27 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Another good brothers moment, and an intense scene starting at the end of the chapter.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 05:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 26 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This chapter has a very good family moment.  It looks like the mystery is about to be solved.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 05:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 25 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This chapter has a very nice brothers moment, and it has a poignant ending. It's a touching chapter.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 03:34 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 24 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery thickens.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 03:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 23 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The story is getting more reviting.  What does the girl have against Ben?  What does Clay's letter say?

Date: 10/27/2018 - 03:04 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 22 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery continues.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 02:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 21 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

A very intense chapter.

Date: 10/27/2018 - 02:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery continues.  This story is definitely a "page turner".

Date: 10/26/2018 - 10:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The Cartwrights showing their compassion.

Date: 10/26/2018 - 10:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

An exciting chapter.

Date: 10/26/2018 - 10:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

A nice cliffhanger at the end of the chapter! It's a "page turner"!

Date: 10/26/2018 - 09:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This story is getting more and more intriguing. 

Date: 10/26/2018 - 09:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery continues.  Will it finally be solved?

Date: 10/26/2018 - 03:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Intriguing mystery, and nice family moment.

Date: 10/26/2018 - 03:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 13 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

A powerful brothers scene in this chapter.

Date: 10/26/2018 - 02:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Wow the mystery deepens!  Who is this stranger?

Date: 10/26/2018 - 02:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery continues. Very intriguing. 

Date: 10/26/2018 - 02:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery continues. Who is the stranger?

Date: 10/26/2018 - 09:24 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Poignant chapter

Date: 10/26/2018 - 09:15 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Riveting chapter.  Who/What is out there?

Date: 10/26/2018 - 09:08 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

The mystery deepens.  Who is this lady?

Date: 10/26/2018 - 08:57 am [Report This]
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