I enjoy stories like I enjoy songs - simple and short but tight and power-packed with words and notes that mean something and aren't just filler. This does just that. It's a great story loaded with action .
I can't say it didn't sting to see Adam graying and limping but I could picture him perfectly. You portrayed a tougher and more mature Adam so believably - i just wish we could have seen him come home on the show. I love his lesson - you wrote the fight scene so well I could see each overturned table and whack to the noggin.
The Jessups were quite the characters. They got schooled, didn't they? And it was nice to see Sam get a starring role and have a story told from his point of view.. I love how he got his courage back. Adam is a good inspiration.
The whole thing was very well- done and I recommend this to anyone looking for a fun quick ride!i