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Title: Part 1 Reviewer: pam Signed
wonderful story

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 01/13/2015 - 09:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Part 1 Reviewer: BettyHT Anonymous

A lot of story lines that converge at the end very satisfactorily.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! It's so nice to know that people enjoy the story

Date: 01/06/2015 - 01:03 pm [Report This]
Title: Part 2 Reviewer: weaver Signed

Yet again another brilliant story and I for one was so pleased to see it as I didn't think you would be writing another one as it was so long after the last one, but yet again you didn't disappoint and I love it especially when all the Cartwright's are together as one big family with their children, and I love that Rosie is a bit of a tomboy and feisty and headstrong just like her father and mother, but her heart was in the right place this time, and poor Adam and Ellie too they were lucky to get home in one piece and relatively unharmed but worked well together as a couple, I would love now to see a story around Adam and his family an everyday life kind of story like this wher the children go to school and what they get up to and Adam having to deal with them as their father and their relationship and escapades with their cousins where all three brothers have to step in, and thank you so much of this one it was brilliant.....so until the next one pleeeeease soon. Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful review. I have "rediscovered" Adam and Ellie and thier famiy. I'm glad you enjoy the story! Keep looking for more stories. I have several ideas in the works.

Date: 12/30/2014 - 06:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Part 2 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

Very good story, I really enjoyed it. Not critisizing, but you need a proof reader. There are a lot of mistakes. Thanks



Author's Response:

I was in a hurry to get in this in the library by Christmas and realized that i attached the unedited version. I will fix that. I'm glad you ennjoyed the story and thanks for reviewing :)

 

Date: 12/23/2014 - 11:49 pm [Report This]
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