I enjoyed this well-written story, Pt29646. You have a natural style that flows well. Also I like that Fran is a young woman with a sense of purpose. She seems a realistic match for Adam.
Yes please do continue the story. I love that Adam gets to be happy. Sometimes it seems hes always getting hurt so this is a great change of pace. I understand that there needs to be some drama but its nice to have a different kind. Thank you
I hope the story continues on the Ponderosa.
Oh, such a great story of Adam and starting a family. I am glad the Captain decided to go back with Adam. Now I Hop a sequel is here to read or one is in the works.
I believe I had read this once before somewhere, but I liked it then and liked it even more on rereading it. It certainly is a different kind of story and now I'm wondering what it would be like to have Abel on the Ponderosa.
I post on Fanfiction so you may have seen it there or on PR DES. Thank you reading it again and commenting on it. When I finish with nano, I think I may try to continue the story.
Thank you - you're so kind.