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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: chezza Signed

I enjoyed this well-written story, Pt29646. You have a natural style that flows well. Also I like that Fran is a young woman with a sense of purpose. She seems a realistic match for Adam.

Date: 10/06/2019 - 06:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Eswallace Signed

Yes please do continue the story. I love that Adam gets to be happy. Sometimes it seems hes always getting hurt so this is a great change of pace. I understand that there needs to be some drama but its nice to have a different kind. Thank you

Date: 07/29/2017 - 03:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elizabeth Holmes Signed

I hope the story continues on the Ponderosa.

Date: 07/20/2017 - 09:03 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: lovemychico Signed

Oh, such a great story of Adam and starting a family. I am glad the Captain decided to go back with Adam. Now I Hop a sequel is here to read or one is in the works. 

Date: 01/17/2017 - 09:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BettyHT Anonymous

I believe I had read this once before somewhere, but I liked it then and liked it even more on rereading it.  It certainly is a different kind of story and now I'm wondering what it would be like to have Abel on the Ponderosa.

Author's Response:

I post on Fanfiction so you may have seen it there or on PR DES. Thank you reading it again and commenting on it. When I finish with nano, I think I may try to continue the story.

Date: 11/13/2014 - 01:02 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: pam Signed
great story you do a terrific job on writting them

Author's Response:

Thank you - you're so kind.

Date: 11/12/2014 - 06:31 pm [Report This]
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