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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisa Signed

Shivers!!!!

Date: 07/19/2016 - 08:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: pam Signed
great story I enjoyed reading it
Date: 11/10/2014 - 05:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

How sad for Roy, but I'm glad he was able to save Rachel. Good story.

Date: 11/02/2014 - 08:37 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bahj Signed
Wow, that was exciting, and sad. The ending was perfect! Great job :0)
Date: 10/30/2014 - 02:08 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: mo1427 Anonymous

What a story! I really felt bad for what Roy endured in losing Mary. So glad that the demon was taken care of in the end. 

Date: 10/28/2014 - 11:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

Chaulk one up for Roy! Thanks!

Date: 10/28/2014 - 11:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: steffie1304 Signed

Oh my, Liz! That was a sad and creepy story. I feel so sorry for Roy. 

You did an amazing job. I loved how only women and children could see the demon and that Adam remembered when A.J. told him about the man in the purple suit. The ending was bittersweet. I'm glad Rachel had been rescued but unfortunately, Mary couldn't be saved. 

Date: 10/28/2014 - 07:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bejules Signed

Poor Mary and poor Sheriff Coffee - that was a great scary story.  Glad that Roy could come to the rescue in the end though!

Date: 10/28/2014 - 07:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Calamity Signed

This should have been an episode, poor Mary.

Date: 10/28/2014 - 01:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

Would have made a great episode...keeping to realism is so much more scarier than scary.

Date: 10/28/2014 - 11:09 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BettyHT Anonymous

Wow, that is one heck of a story.  Scary as it was, at least it had a happy ending for Rachel, but poor Mary.  It was so realistic and that is the best kind of horror story -- one that seems like it could actually happen.

Date: 10/28/2014 - 09:53 am [Report This]
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