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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Good story.  Sweet and Touching.

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Thank you, Sierras, for reading and leaving comments.

Date: 03/02/2018 - 01:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

What a lovely story.  I love how Adam is thinking of his brothers and Ben before himself.  His love for all of them, and for Marie, is very apparent.

Author's Response:

What a nice thing to say about this story, CowgirlAtHeart. I'm glad you enjoy the relationships between the characters as I write them. Thank you.

Date: 05/04/2017 - 11:25 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed

Aww, such a sweet little scene! Thanks for sharing this!

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Thanks, Annie K, for reading!

Date: 04/17/2017 - 11:56 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

A very sweet story.

Date: 10/31/2014 - 12:56 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamant Signed

Lovely. Just lovely. To have Adam visit Marie's grave and reveal what he does is heart-warming; Adam is such a sensitive soul. Thanks for sharing ths little gem.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Adamant.

Date: 10/25/2014 - 06:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: pookaire Signed

I loved this! His stammer as he tried to gather his thoughts and express himself exactly, reminds me of The Hopefuls.  Very comfortable piece.

Author's Response:

Thank you, pookaire, for reading and reviewing. I always picture Adam as a little awkward around Marie. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Date: 10/25/2014 - 01:29 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BettyHT Anonymous

What a wonderful insight into Adam's thoughts about his family and the loss that they suffered.  The roses and the bluebird were especially nice in creating the special atmospehere for the visit he made.

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Thanks for reading, Betty!

Date: 10/24/2014 - 04:12 pm [Report This]
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