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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

To be honest I thought I was reading the wrong story as the prompt title in the forum is 'It Was Always You' but here in the library it's 'Wild Card' - I was under the impression the poem or story had to have the song title as its title ... 

Anyway, that said the story took off at a pace and kept going.  I admit to some confusion but then that is the nature of a doppelganger tale. 

Not wanting to disclose the plot other than a story with Joe and a pretty blonde, it's ten to one that their paths will cross. 

That I hadn't seen the Bradley Meredith episodes was neither here nor there.  This is your story - a story I enjoyed and I admire your bravery at tackling a look-a-like theme. 

Oh, yes - the prompt was there and dealt with aptly. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story.  Your feedback is always very helpful.

Date: 04/23/2019 - 02:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

That's quite an exciting story there. I like the sweet ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!   In another week, I'll be adding a little postscript to the story, a heart to heart between Ben and Bradley.

Date: 04/22/2019 - 12:59 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Elizabeth, tackling a doppelganger story is quite a challenge. I would think it difficult, at times, to write such that the reader is not as confused as the characters in the story. You've done a good job in that respect. While I could sense Roy and Clem's confusion at times, I was confident I knew who the real Ben was.

I like Marian, and I hope she appears in another of your stories. I'd like to know about her.

Great use of your prompt title.

Date: 04/17/2019 - 09:55 am [Report This]
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