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Title: Will the Real Ben Cartwright Please Stand Up? Reviewer: Rosanna Signed

A very intresting story I hope the three sons think up a question for their pa incase there is a next time. Poor Ben being put through all of that! great story telling really enjoyed the  Dialogue between the boys.

Date: 04/26/2019 - 02:35 am [Report This]
Title: Will the Real Ben Cartwright Please Stand Up? Reviewer: ansinico Signed

That you tackled a difficult subject such as a 'doppelganger' I congratulate you.  Some parts of the story for me didn't quite ring true or come across as feasable. But, as I don't want to give away too much in a review here maybe I will bring them up in the forum.

 

 

Date: 04/24/2019 - 07:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Will the Real Ben Cartwright Please Stand Up? Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Stories such as this one can become confusing to readers, in my experience, but this story was well thought out - keeping it straight forward and not confusing at all.

It was nice to see some familiar characters mentioned in this one - I don't want to give too much away, so I won't mention names.

This is a very interesting take on the Ponderosa Prospects challenge, littlejoenice. Well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Tracy. I had a bit of a hard time trying to make sure all the details stayed intact so that it would make sense, but it was worth it. I had a lot of fun!

Date: 04/17/2019 - 10:59 am [Report This]
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