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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Nicely done, Elizabeth. Your story has a touch of the flavor of "The Savage" and White Buffalo Woman. Ben was always a friend to the land, his land and others' land. I believe you picked the right son to be with Ben on his second encounter with Sierra. While all of the C sons felt the way ben did about the land, Hoss always seems the most like Ben in that respect.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story.  Those are apt comparisons.  I appreciate the feedback.  

Date: 03/21/2019 - 03:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamant Signed

An interesting story that, IMO, is about ecology; Ben was rescued by the spirit of the mountains because although he wants to reap the benefits of the mountains, he doesn't want to raze the forests for profit. I suppose that's why Sierra refered to him as her friend.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story and for your feedback. 

Date: 03/17/2019 - 09:27 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is an interesting and haunting story.  As has already been mentioned it is intriguing. This is a very nice Ben story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate you reading my story and for the feedback.   Thank you very much.

Date: 03/16/2019 - 12:20 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

Wow, what an intriguing story!  I couldn't wait to find out the answer to Ben's mystery!  I love how this story shows Ben's love of the land and his desire that it be preserved.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story.  My heart is warmed that you liked it.

Date: 03/16/2019 - 12:49 am [Report This]
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