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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisala Signed

Wow, that was an exciting plot that would have made for an excellent episode.  That heartwrenching talk between Adam and Joe was killer - very, very emotional and sad. I loved Esther's bravery and thank God for her!  A nailbiter of a story.  Well done!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your response, Lisal! When someone says that something I've written could make a good episode it's especially gratifying. And your reaction to that talk between Adam and Joe is just what I would hope for.

Date: 03/10/2019 - 11:27 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: littlejoenice Signed

You really had me terrified for a while there, debpet2. The actions and descriptions you used were so real, I could almost feel like I was right there with them. I actually found myself sighing with relief when they discovered Adam to be alive.

It's too bad Esther and Ben couldn't have a life together, but both had obligations: one to their tribe, one to his sons. Neither one could give up what they lived for. It would be too hard.

Excellent work.



Author's Response:

Thank you littlejoenice!

I very much appreciate your strong response to the brothers' dilemma and your understanding of the situation between Ben and Esther.
Date: 03/06/2019 - 01:11 pm [Report This]
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