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Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: littlejoenice Signed

This is a really terrific story, Sierras. The close family bond the Cartwrights had really shown through here. You captured their characters very well, to the point where I could hear their voices in my mind as I read it.

I especially liked the part about the squirrels and owls, especially where TJ makes a remark about the squirrels chattering because there's something they don't like. And the casual conversation about owls peeking in the windows was quite amusing!

The ending was wonderful. Joe needed to have a talk with Pa to settle his thoughts and feelings concerning his father and Toby.

Wonderful job.



Author's Response: Thank you, littlejoenice. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and you could hear the character's voices in your mind. Thank you for the review. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 02/27/2019 - 12:08 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Lisala Signed

Such a touching ending , Sierras  You made me quite nervous in the scene where everything came down and Adam almost got shot.  Very high tension.  This story was brimming with action and I loved the inclusion of all four Cartwrights.  Great use of the prompt. Great job all around!



Author's Response: Thank you, Lisala. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I've really been enjoying doing the Bonanza Ballads challenges. Thank you for the review. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 02/02/2019 - 09:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

I really enjoyed this story.

It was riveting at times.  This really would have made a great episode.

Your portrayal of the Cartwrights was so true to character and so real.

Loved their intuition and the little secrets just between them.  Nice!

A cute moment came when a certain man rides into the yard. 😉

The ending was pure Bonanza.

Well done!

 



Author's Response: Thank you, Tahoe Lee. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and you think the portrayals of the Cartwrights are true and real. I really appreciate that. It's something that's very important to me. Thank you for your review. :)
Date: 02/01/2019 - 11:40 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Sierras, you've written a story that could easily have been an episode. It's more than an action-plot driven story, showing the family bond between the Cartwrights. Nice use of your prompt title.



Author's Response: Thank you, Tracy. Wow you think this story could have been an episode? Thank you. I'm glad the bonds of the Cartwrights came through. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 01/30/2019 - 08:26 pm [Report This]
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